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congrats 
The main thing I noticed was the railing to the left an right of the statue. They don't seem to line up well.
It appears that there is slight lighting a little to the right of the viewer (on the right side of the woman and statue). If that's correct, it's probably man made lighting, and you might consider making the light warmer. If that's not the case, you might consider harsher shadows on the right sides of the woman and the statue.
The only other thing I noticed, I had to really nit pick to find. The center pillar in combo with the far left wall with the clock, seems to have a mild perspective issue. To my eyes it appears that the clock wall should be the end of that arch, but instead it cuts off maybe a 1/4 of the end of the arch.
If the end of the arch isn't supposed to be the wall with the clock, you might consider putting it behind the stair railing and making it a little bit more in shadow.
It has occured to me though, that if an arch ends at a wall, you might not get the full arch you would see between two pillars. So it is totally possible it is by design.
As for the impact of the drawing, it didn't make me HAVE TO HAVE this book. I was interested, it looked like it had possibility for something I would read, but it didn't instantly end up in my hypothetical shopping cart. I would have had to read the flaps before deciding.
If I came off as rather critical, I'd like to sat that it's a beautiful piece with exquisite detail.
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